Storyboard for Revised Idea

Here is my storyboard for my idea alterations. I have sketched a rough copy of each shot I want to include and the order I want it to be. I am not sure if all of them will look effective and I may have to change some of them in order to make my video excel. I will experiment with different shots when I am on location and hopefully I will find some more interesting shots that work well with the locations, costumes and props used.