1st Draft of Music Video

Here is my two first drafts of my final music video, there are sections that I intend on changing and replacing but it is coming together nicely. You can see the difference from my draft to my final video and the parts that I have replaced make the video look 100x better. I have also added in a title screen of the song and artist in my final video as opposed to this version. It makes it look more professional and realistic.
The second one I have uploaded is a slightly improved version but they are very simliar. The second one is more like my final one as I have only changed two sections in it.